Thursday, October 24, 2013

Come on let me go out...


Dear Mom and Dad,

 I am writing this letter to you because as we all know I want to go out this Friday. I feel as if I should be able to go out because of many reasons. To be honest I’m such a good student. I do all my work and get good grades. All my grades are either at or where they are supposed to be. I gave you my tracker the other day and you guys congratulated me. I also do a lot of work around the house, I help Isaac get his homework done, and I help Tatiana whenever she needs help, I was the dishes, clean the bathroom, clean my room and wash my clothes. What more could you ask for?  I do everything I’m told unlike my sister Tatiana who is like a wall. We talk to her and nothing happens, I’m so much better. If you don’t let me go out I will not help around the house anymore, I’ll be rude to my teachers and to my brother and sister. I will go anyways if you don’t let me you guys have no choice. I’m old enough to make my own decisions and I know what’s best for me. And if you say I can’t come back home I know you guys won’t hold to your word. You guy can’t just kick me out of the house I’m a minor and there is no way of kicking me out. This is just so stupid how you guys never let me go out but you guys were allowed to go anywhere as kids and me it takes lightning to strike the house to be able to go out for one day. In my defense I never make stupid decisions either I’m a good girl and I’m that way because you guys have taught me how to be that way as I have grown up. You know who you daughter is and what decisions I will make so in that case I should be allowed to go on Friday and have a little fun.

Love,

Johanna Arias

2 comments:

  1. LOL we were just talking about this :D
    You did a great job targeting your audience because you can clearly tell you are directly speaking to your parents. I hear alot of voice in this too ( with good punctuation)
    I hear the two emotional appeals from the beginning to the end and that is great. i hope you got to go out :)

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  2. You make very good points, and you chose the right audience to pinpoint. I hope you had a good night.

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