Dear Mom and Dad,
I am writing this letter to you because as we
all know I want to go out this Friday. I feel as if I should be able to go out
because of many reasons. To be honest I’m such a good student. I do all my work
and get good grades. All my grades are either at or where they are supposed to
be. I gave you my tracker the other day and you guys congratulated me. I also
do a lot of work around the house, I help Isaac get his homework done, and I
help Tatiana whenever she needs help, I was the dishes, clean the bathroom,
clean my room and wash my clothes. What more could you ask for? I do everything I’m told unlike my sister Tatiana
who is like a wall. We talk to her and nothing happens, I’m so much better. If
you don’t let me go out I will not help around the house anymore, I’ll be rude
to my teachers and to my brother and sister. I will go anyways if you don’t let
me you guys have no choice. I’m old enough to make my own decisions and I know what’s
best for me. And if you say I can’t come back home I know you guys won’t hold
to your word. You guy can’t just kick me out of the house I’m a minor and there
is no way of kicking me out. This is just so stupid how you guys never let me
go out but you guys were allowed to go anywhere as kids and me it takes lightning
to strike the house to be able to go out for one day. In my defense I never
make stupid decisions either I’m a good girl and I’m that way because you guys
have taught me how to be that way as I have grown up. You know who you daughter
is and what decisions I will make so in that case I should be allowed to go on Friday
and have a little fun.
Love,
Johanna Arias
LOL we were just talking about this :D
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job targeting your audience because you can clearly tell you are directly speaking to your parents. I hear alot of voice in this too ( with good punctuation)
I hear the two emotional appeals from the beginning to the end and that is great. i hope you got to go out :)
You make very good points, and you chose the right audience to pinpoint. I hope you had a good night.
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